多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:( ~3 h$ s/ o: l! e% U3 j+ ^$ W
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五绝 无题 Sparse Stars& _" A6 ~$ H" [ k5 P; r
莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night- K& [7 ~6 w% Y" O1 o, E9 f
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high* o* x1 X: N2 o" c3 B. J
虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars
5 R6 N5 I( P. H6 R5 H心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright