多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:3 n+ t1 F3 E2 V0 b }0 q
) [; h0 O" g4 I0 |' n/ Q: L1 {五绝 无题 Sparse Stars
" F. f* ?- \7 e3 {# `2 ], h6 P莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night7 X) Y* e; C& G. s7 L) I
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high' q6 m {' ?& k, Q9 L5 |
虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars
% t( i. n4 [9 |3 {% F: l心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright