多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:! W3 K) Q3 F, n$ U2 C. Z6 j
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五绝 无题 Sparse Stars4 _, A5 u+ b# K' T/ X& h
莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night7 V4 P" ^4 J. O- m l: v" u# y
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high
6 G; Y4 j, T, P+ H4 {虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars8 T v. r8 d# a
心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright