多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:
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$ h* z3 b9 f, M% P: }五绝 无题 Sparse Stars7 o. @. k6 S8 ?0 S# P, F
莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night" a# }" B1 z7 m1 \, Q8 X+ I0 y
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high
8 c6 S; }8 t9 W0 a, z9 g* ?虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars8 K4 _0 G( E# Y+ {/ ]
心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright