多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:
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五绝 无题 Sparse Stars
0 F6 a- {( K# j* L! ^. {/ I莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night. y9 t0 S- o( p: M
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high
4 U$ A& ]. [9 h3 W7 U虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars
4 {2 ?+ _0 D E9 B/ f& `/ a心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright