多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:
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7 u: o# ?# k% ?6 A五绝 无题 Sparse Stars
4 U# [* U6 `0 ?6 z莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night' a# P: U) u6 u/ O
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high, w, H" D X! |! U
虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars2 L% J8 X$ H7 Q8 z9 n2 ]
心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright