多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:
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# F' b# h% \- e% h, j五绝 无题 Sparse Stars
8 [' r5 f7 P6 U# Q1 A8 ]% l莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night3 L) l/ e; [- I4 `2 d0 O5 {* K Z1 f3 v
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high
( d$ s8 n" h5 Z. V# [6 S, u9 f4 s虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars
& o7 O6 H% S& |9 f) n- R; D5 E心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright