多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:
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) K, C% V9 I8 p8 E* M, F0 Z五绝 无题 Sparse Stars8 E, b' v# h" @2 A3 d' b
莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night
7 ]0 m* B! T" V! i/ c% b6 R( B此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high% l0 Y# \1 W; D& r: y8 Y
虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars8 H, G5 i! u/ p
心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright