多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:
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) E, f& A; i1 q+ L五绝 无题 Sparse Stars
/ R+ u0 c0 e5 ~5 T莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night3 U) |/ k! _# R6 h
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high2 q7 z/ N- V" V6 ~6 w& E
虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars
3 Z/ B" f- I; ?心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright