多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:
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" K; h) b' X& |; B3 o, V五绝 无题 Sparse Stars
' c/ O$ }# ^- ~; h, R* a( [6 j莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night
3 c3 ^' i! L: O6 k4 o1 u" h此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high
# s& r# a- ], R9 t4 n% a3 m虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars" R% S1 I+ d' b0 V# X# r+ K
心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright