多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:
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五绝 无题 Sparse Stars! v( b+ N! }1 a, g/ O& Z2 z
莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night$ K6 z& t( B( ]: a1 }, H" V
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high
' Q2 T0 {) n- ?虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars
0 e. R3 Z; s# A' T, t, J [* e心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright