多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:. l/ R, M/ o8 n& E3 j4 y$ w8 O
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五绝 无题 Sparse Stars
* F- d9 x* `7 l莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night0 M& ^( Z5 @/ v, H9 Y3 o1 j
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high5 [% v( S% n$ u2 Y. i# _
虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars1 E$ ]5 f Q( y* E% s
心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright