多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:' z: D, ]5 t$ q% w, p
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五绝 无题 Sparse Stars
7 w$ u0 E9 t; U( W4 o& _$ l0 @莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night
/ u( l* g+ O" g5 z: I此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high
* }, M% C/ I6 L+ y虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars
8 N8 \2 x+ b1 X% j8 M. s) `心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright